That square riser is really intense,maybe drop it by a db. Besides that it sounds good.
I've never been a fan of the genre but this isn't bad. Good Job!
Sounds are good!
That was okay but needs something else,as you said,basic. Good sounds overall. You helped my ears stop bleeding from the last 'song' I listened to.
I go by the "Play Loud, or don't Play At All" rule.
Okay,no sorry. Industrial has an effective beat and melody. Not the sound of a dying fax machine. Not even sure what to call this besides the backup to screamo. Don't mean to come off as an ass but this just doesn't sound good.
If "Dying Fax Machine" was a music subgenre, I'd totally wreck the top charts.
Actually not bad with the area dynamics and the beat of the song. The notes are obviously repetitive and you seem to have issues with keeping the velocity even, but overall a fairly enjoyable song.
Instead of the repetitive shaker noise maybe an arpeggiated instrument to your chord set to help fill out the kind of empty song. All in all though it's not bad and sound like something from Forza Horizon.
I don't mean to be offensive but, this song sounds like something you'd put to a parody of a stupid video remix lol. It's not bad but really jumpy and sharp.
Not a fan of the guitar without a beat but your voice is worthy of singing with practice. Sounded similar to the singer in the postal service.
didnt help that the guitar was out of tune (shit!) The rhythm isn't totally smooth yet as I'm still mastering some chords. Thanks for listening :)
Some true 8bit right there lol. Nice.
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